finn+reading+log

Amazing Reading logs Finn. There is so much information here! You have thought very carefully about the evidence that backs up your personal response and character descriptions. Think carefully about how the author structures their writing in the books you enjoy the most and see if you can use these own techniques in your own writing. Thank you for the fabulous effort! Mrs H

Both of these books sound exciting Finn. Anthony Horowitz has a reputation as an excellent author so take notice of what excites and draws in his audience so you ca use some of these fabulous features in your own writing. Mrs H

A fabulous first reading log for 2012 Finn. Your character descriptions are accurate and you have used evidence from the book to back these up. Your plot summary is excellent and allows others an insight into the book without giving away what happens.There were definitely parts of the book that were a bit boring and I agree, could have been shortened or at least livened up a bit. Take with your punctuation. There are a couple of parts that need full stops rather than commas. e.g .'..plant years ago. I am also...' Impressive log and super presentation. Mrs H