Amelia+Reading+log

Hi Amelia, These reading logs are looking great. I have read all three and am quite interested in finding out more about Edward Tulane one. Take care to proof read and check things like having capital letters for names. In some of the character descriptions you have used evidence from the book well to back up the adjectives that you have selected to describe the characters. Try to do more of this in your personal response...remember to say how it made you feel at certain stages and why this was, referring back to parts of the book. Thanks for the great time and effort you have put into these Amelia. Mrs H









Great first reading log of the year Amelia! You backed up your character desciptions with evidence from the book and I agreed 100% with your personal response. It was both frustrating and disappointing that Jack didn't ask for help himself but thank goodness he had a friend like Anna. Remember to read over your sentences before you publish to check that the grammar and punctuation is correct. note it is 'could have' not could of'. Well done! MrsH