rebecca+reading+logs

Thanks for a fabulous first reading log for 2012 Rebecca. You were able to back up your character descriptions and personla responses by referring back to evidence in the book. I agree that the author could have used more interesting and descriptive language however because a lot of it was looking from Jack's perspective(point of view) it probably made sense that the language was quite simple. Remember to check over your writing before you publish so that it all reads correctly. There are a couple of grammatical errors where I think words might be missing, e.g. '...some troubles and is unable to solve' should perhaps be '...some troubles that he is unable to solve on his own' ?     5/11/12     26th of November 2012  <span style="color: #e200ff; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; text-align: center;">